sexta-feira, 21 de agosto de 2026

Book: Copenhagen - Longin for Freedon

 

Chapter 1 – Fracture

“Gabriel Jensen, you’re still in bed! Get up and get dressed, we’re running late!”

“Okay, Mom, I’m coming!”

It was Saturday morning, and even though Gabriel knew this was the day the family always went to church, he never felt particularly excited about waking up early on a weekend.

Still, he obeyed—not just out of habit, but because deep down he admired his parents and knew their advice always came from a place of love.

At nineteen, Haline no longer raced Gabriel down the stairs, but she stood waiting for him in the lobby, holding a thick stack of stapled pages—her Public Administration notes, which she reviewed even during breakfast.

As their father pulled the car out of Vila Romana, she spoke enthusiastically about a social urban planning project, her eyes shining with that almost impatient desire to fix the world.

To Gabriel, watching his sister plan her future with that blend of technical precision and the gentleness she had inherited from their mother was simply part of the scenery. He didn't know it yet, but Haline was his blueprint for the person he hoped to become once the world finally got serious.

Vila Romana. Alto da Lapa.

Gabriel bolts down the apartment stairs, trying to be the first one to reach the ground floor, as if an unspoken competition existed between him, his father, his mother, and his sister.

His lungs burning.

Sneakers pounding against concrete.

The thrill of winning.

But the elevator carrying the others gets there first, and when Gabriel pushes open the stairwell door, there they are, smiling and waiting for him.

On the way down, José had even stopped to leave the newspaper at the door of the woman in apartment 42, who had recently undergone hip surgery.

That was the rhythm of their home: quiet acts of care that Gabriel saw as natural, almost invisible.

Carmem, Haline’s mother, carried a carefully wrapped box of homemade bread to give to a friend at church.

“Oh, come on—that doesn’t count!” Gabriel protested between breaths, laughing. “You got there first, but next Saturday I’m winning!”

Everyone smiles.

Haline messes up his hair.

Carmem straightens the collar of his shirt.

And José, with his calm and steady way about him, simply says:

“No cheating.”

Gabriel bursts into laughter.

At that moment, life feels perfect—natural and certain, like sunlight spilling into the morning.

A simple happiness. Almost endless.

As if nothing could ever threaten that routine.

As if the four of them were meant to walk through life together forever.

But sometimes eternity fits inside a single second.

On the way to church, the car moves through the busy avenue.

Light conversations.

Muffled laughter.

Comments about Saturday lunch.

Gabriel sits in the back seat, watching daylight dance across the window, lost in the thoughts of a child who still knows nothing of fractures.

Then suddenly everything collapses into one single sound:

A hard impact.

Brutal.

Final.

The sudden glare of headlights through the side window.

The smell of burning metal before he even understands what happened.

A truck, speeding through a red light.

The world spins.

Glass explodes.

Screams.

The metallic sound of something that will never be repaired.

The world that had once felt so safe folds in on itself.

Cracks.

Shatters.

When silence finally comes, Gabriel opens his eyes.

Nothing hurts.

No wounds.

No blood.

Only the smell of gasoline, the ringing in his ears, and the distant sound of people running, shouting for help.

He tries to understand.

He sees his mother’s body in the front seat, motionless.

His father slumped over the steering wheel.

Haline beside him, still breathing, but injured, trapped beneath twisted metal, her eyes half-open as she struggles to say her brother’s name.

Gabriel feels no pain at all.

Not even a scratch.

And standing before that impossible scene, a question begins to form inside him—a question that will follow him for the rest of his life:

Why me?

Why am I the only one left alive?

He doesn't know it yet, but something had begun there—

something far greater than grief, greater than loss, greater than explanation.

That Saturday would forever be remembered as the day the boy stopped being only a son, a brother, a student—

and began carrying an invisible burden:

the burden of being the only survivor.


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